From the first lecture, the main topic of what we have learnt is all about what is writing skill. Writing is used to communicate specific information or ideas, utilizing the formats, language, and content relevant to the workplace. Then, I learnt that we can judge a people by just reading their writings, maybe he is a rude person or she is a shy person, it will all shown in writing. We must remember that writing has to be always clearer than spoken language, as in writing form, we can't show our facial expression or tone of voice to the reader, so we have to imagine before writing and bring up the 5 senses in our writing in order to let the reader feel what we want them to feel.
Furthermore, a good writing will not be done without a well-planned process of writing. According to the process, it will be first prewriting, then drafting, revising, editing, and publishing. Moreover, we also need to ask ourselves what makes a good writer and also a good writing. Good writer would be people that know how to communicate and transfer one's thought or idea to the reader, while good writing is a writing that written in a good way and correct format which makes the appearance of the writing is such a perfect work.
From the first tutorial, I didn't score well in my first test as I don't really heard my lecturer say that we will be having a test during tutorial class. Maybe it's too early yet blur for me to save information in my brain in the morning of 9 a.m. But it's okay, no pain no gain, I promise myself I won't repeat the same mistake again. Good luck to myself for the coming classes!
Furthermore, I have done a poem with the theme of love with my team. The whole poem was actually written all by my own. The following is the poem that I wrote:
Love,
makes people blind.
Unconditionally I treat him kind,
in the end he's still not mine.
Love,
what is that actually?
If I could ever learn it wholly,
it wouldn't have turned into a tragedy.
Love,
never come as what you expect,
but when it comes,
it may get you an heart attack,
or forever stuck in the past.
It's obviously a sad story about love, which I have literally experienced.
In first stanza, it shows that sometimes love can make people blind, not physically blind, but heart. No matter how many times you ask yourself why did I fall in love with him or her, you will still couldn't get the answer. Doesn't matter how much you have did and sacrifice for him or her, he or she still might not appreciate it or he or she won't love you the same. Thing just isn't right sometimes.
In second stanza, it tries to show that I really don't understand what is love, how it should be felt, what taste it should be. If I could ever learn that, maybe I won't do it wrong, I wouldn't have make myself suffer, or even him.
In stanza three, it shows that love can come at anytime and anywhere. If it's a beautiful love, you will get an sweet heart attack, if it's tragic love, you may forever locked in the past, stained in your mind.
I can write more of words to describe how bad I was hurt, but I still prefer to put my emotion into singing sad songs. And I don't want to talk more about love, since I don't know what is love, apparently, and neither does he.
Very good sharing, by the way are you saying that none of your team members helped you out? Then why are they called team members? More like "Team member" HAHAHAHAH
ReplyDeleteThey did give a try, but their works just not so good and suitable for the poem. And my team agree with my poem, so we all decided to present mine. Hahaha
DeleteI like your "Love" poem and you have explain what meaning inside the poem, good job!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteNice sharing bro, keep going and do the thing you like to do!
ReplyDeleteI will keep on doing the thing which only won't affect another. Keep effort something is good determination, but not making trouble to people at the same time. Thanks for your comment also! You're most welcome!
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ReplyDeleteGood sharing! Maybe I know your story, be yourself no matter what they say bro!
ReplyDeleteYes and I will be myself. Thanks for always being my listener. Memeda
DeleteGood sharing! But the poem like you have lovelorn before cause look like many experience!
ReplyDeleteNot really lovelorn. But the feeling is quite the same. I didn't experience much in love, but I experienced a different kind of love affair.
DeleteGood sharing! But the poem like you have lovelorn before cause look like many experience!
ReplyDeleteGood sharing Winson! Remember time may heal everything!
ReplyDeleteThank you! Yes, I do believe time can heal wounds, but it takes time and yet depends on how bad it injured.
Deletei think we should call you "LoveLord" hahaha XD
ReplyDeleteNo I'm not. lol By the way, thanks for giving that nickname, I'll appreciate it. haha
DeleteSo nice winsome the poem is very nice really <3
ReplyDeleteI have learn some new words from you!! Thank you very much!!
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